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Thursday 29 August 2019

Descriptive writing

W'sup bloggers? This term I've been doing descriptive writing. If you don't know what descriptive writing is, then I'll tell you. Descriptive writing is when you find something to describe and write about it! I've pasted in my writing so you can see!


I've decided to write about this birthday party down below



There is strawberry red jelly and delicious birthday food like cheese and salami or egg sandwiches, cake, doughnuts, nuts and kebabs. There is a table, and it has a cyan blue tablecloth with magenta pink polka dots. There is a shimmering silver mirror on the gloomy purple wall. There is a solid red vase on the shiny white windowsill.

The cake tastes delicious, it is soft with a gooey strawberry filling. The doughnuts are sweet, soft and mushy.

The excited cheerful birthday boy is having his most wonderful sixth birthday party because all of his bestest friends are there.


I would be able to smell the viola flowers and the smoke from the candles on the birthday cake. There are eggs in the sandwiches and the egg smells like something rotten!

Bye 'til my next post!

Wednesday 28 August 2019

my epic biteable


Hey bloggers! this week I've been doing something very sneaky... BITEABLE!!!!! my class has ALL been doing biteable!

I've pasted in my biteable, about MINECRAFT!


Till my next post, bye!

Friday 16 August 2019

my speech in action!

hey my peeps!! as you know, this post is about my speech!
i've pasted my speech in down here.


Did you know that by being a Youtuber you can become a millionaire? I think that youtubing is a job. The reason that I think this is because: I think being a YouTuber can be entertaining, you can earn money and you’re keeping kids occupied!

I think that Youtubing is a real job because it can be entertaining because you have to add pictures and music. You can also add your webcam in the corner of your screen and sometimes you might be so into your game that you forget that you are youtubing! It’s so fun! You can also become famous and popular. A youtuber can be entertaining because they make videos about games, reviews and help other kids with their school work.
I think that Youtubing is a real job because you can earn millions of dollars! You can earn money by getting sponsorship for your channel. To get the sponsorship you need to have lots of subscribers. Some people think that Youtubers get money for every single subscriber. A subscriber is someone who watches your videos then clicks a button to get a notification when a new video is posted. Jeffree Star is a make up artist youtuber and he makes videos about how to do different make up styles. He earns $18 million just for making videos! DanTDM makes videos about games that kids play like Chikin, Minecraft and Roblox. He makes videos to show people what the games are about and how to play them. They are kind of like a tutorial to teach people. He makes $18.5 million for his videos.
I think that Youtubing is a real job because by being a youtuber you’re saving adults the trouble of having to entertain their kids! Instead of entertaining their kids, adults can do what they want, like studying and stuff for their job! If the kids are entertained then they won’t come and annoy adults because they can do their work and get chores done around the house, They will get them done faster because the kids won’t be in the way. Also I think that kids might want to get their homework done so that then they can watch youtubers! It’s a win-win for everyone!

I believe that youtubing is a job because it is entertaining, it is a good way to earn lots of money and it keeps kids occupied. So now do you agree with me?


now i've put in what my teacher thought!!
Comment:
You have some awesome convincing ideas in your speech and a brilliant introduction and conclusion. They really made an impact but we just needed you to be a bit louder! You had some great expression and started off well in the beginning looking up at the audience every so often. Next time have a bit more practice and you’ll be able to do it throughout the whole speech :)

You can watch my speech here because the file is too big to put on blogger!


bye till my next post!

Monday 12 August 2019

my speech!

w'sup bloggers ! i'm back with another post today! but this time its about my speech!

I have made a screencast, again using screencastify!
Please have a watch!

if you liked it please leave a comment down below!

bye till my next post!

casey out!